Just In Time
Once upon a time their was mum and the 3 three brothers and their names are, John, Jack and Johnson. John and Jack are 14 years old and Johnson is 11 years old. They lived in house near by a forest and in that forest is a scary river where all the electric eels that were in the area stayed.
When it was Saturday, the three brothers were playing rugby outside at the backyard. Suddenly John was running and accidently got tackled by Johnson. John got back up and started to run again and accidently fell into the scary river. Jack and Johnson ran to John and started to help John get out of the river where the electric eels stayed.
The electric eels came as fast as they could to get John. John was pulled out of the scary river by his brothers Johnson and Jack just in time before the eels came. John had a sore head because the scary river was hollow .
John was taken in the house and Mum took out a ice packet and put that packet on John head. John couldn’t move so mum told Johnson and Jack to lift John into the car and soon Mum drove John, Johnson and Jack to the hospital.
As soon as they got there, Mum quickly took the kids into the hospital and John was nearly going to die but Mum made it to the doctors just in time to save John from his death.
By Chris
